When should we use one word, when should we use two, for terms like “log in”, “sign up”, “back up”, and the like? This is a hot topic among technical writers, UX writers, and any designers who use text in their products.
The question is particularly relevant in the software industry, but it affects other product areas too. For example, a gym may invite customers to an exercise class with wording like this:
We promise you a great workout
Work out with your friends and colleagues
How can we tell whether we should use one word or two?
Even if we ourselves already know the difference, how can we teach other people, like the engineers, designers, product managers, and other people who work on our product interfaces and documentation?
A presentation – a bit of fun with a serious goal
I’ve put together a presentation that explains a way to help ourselves and others decide when to use one word, when to use two. It’s a bit of fun, but with a serious goal.
You can find the presentation on SlideShare: One word or two? How to teach the difference between “login” and “log in”, and other mind-bogglingly important compound words.
This blog post contains some extracts from the presentation.
The presentation shows a couple of slides containing a few sentences. Embedded in the sentences are some strings of repeated letters, like lllll or bbbbb.
To play along, you’ll need to replace the string of letters with the terms “log in” or “back up”.
Try speaking the sentences in your head., or even saying them out loud. This is where the bit comes in about your partner needing to be in a good mood: you could even ask your partner to play along with you!
In the first slide, replace llllllll with “log in”
Here’s the first slide with letters for replacement – replace each series of lllll with “log in”. Don’t write anything down – just say the sentences in your head or out loud:
In the next slide – replace bbbbb with “back up”:
What’s the outcome?
Did you notice any pattern in the way you pronounced the words “login” and “log in”?
If you’re like me, your stress pattern in the middle sentence is different from the first and third sentences.
In the middle sentence, we give equal emphasis to both parts of the phrase: log in.
In the first and third sentences, we give greater emphasis to the first part of the phrase: login.
The stress patterns are the same for backup.
In the middle sentence, we give equal emphasis to both parts of the phrase: back up; log in.
In the first and third sentences, we give greater emphasis to the first part of the phrase: backup; login.
And it’s the middle sentence that uses two words, while the first and third use one word.
So, you can use stress patterns to decide whether to use one word or two.
That’s one way of doing things, but what’s the theory behind it?
The rules are something like this:
- If the phrase is acting as a noun, use one word. This includes cases when the phrase is used to qualify another noun.
- If it’s a verb, use two words.
The presentation goes into more detail and includes some sources and additional reading.
What about hyphens?
Yes, what about hyphens. I think this is my favourite slide, because it shows a pic of a Tawny Frogmouth. They’re the coolest birds ever.
I’ll leave you to read the rest in the presentation itself
The complete presentation is on SlideShare: One word or two? How to teach the difference between “login” and “log in”, and other mind-bogglingly important compound words.
(Note: This presentation is a prettified and updated version of my earlier blog post, published in April 2014. There’s a spider in that one.)
We’ve just announced the next Write the Docs meetup in Sydney:
What happens at the meetup
We currently have one speaker, Michalina, who will talk about five steps to successful content strategy.
There’ll be more speakers, and the opportunity to chat to old and new friends.
Who can attend?
If you’re interested in technical documentation, you’re welcome!
Date, time, and location
Tuesday 3 July 2018, at 6pm. We aim to finish around 7.30pm.
At the Atlassian offices, 341 George St, Sydney.
Want to air your ideas?
If you have an idea for a presentation or a lightning talk, let me know.
On Wednesday this week, the Write the Docs (WtD) Australia group held a meetup entirely in cyberspace. Or, in the cloud, remote, virtual… whatever you’d like to call it. 🙂 Here are some thoughts on the experience.
Huge kudos to Swapnil Ogale for thinking up the idea of holding a remote meetup, organising it, and running it. It was a great idea and worked very well.
To attend the meetup, we all logged in to a GoToMeeting session. The meetup consisted of a few lightning talks and a couple of presentations. You can see the lineup in the meetup details.
The biggest takeaway for me is this:
People really do want to share their thoughts and experiences with others.
The lightning talks were a great way of doing that. Some presenters had slides, others just spoke from the heart. The variety of topics was intriguing, and listening to the talks was rewarding.
The chat screen was alive and humming throughout the meetup, with people commenting on the topic that the presenter was currently discussing, and on related topics, and on completely unrelated matters too. It was fun and enlightening to be able to watch the presentation and the chat at the same time. This is something that an in-person meetup doesn’t offer. During an in-person meetup, people sit quietly during the presentation, for the most part, and discussion happens afterwards.
It was good not to have to travel. I enjoyed the luxury of going straight home from work, powering up the computer, attending the meetup, then stepping out of the room to join my husband for dinner.
As with all meetups, whether virtual or in person, it was great to see everyone. Especially the speakers who enabled their video cameras so we could see their faces while they spoke.
The remote meetup was also a slightly scary experience, especially for me as a presenter.
I’ve jotted down some notes of what I found scary (I scare easily), primarily so people know they should persevere if they run into technical glitches when connecting to a remote meetup or presenting at one. Things usually work out!
We didn’t know which online platform we’d use until a until a few minutes before the meetup: candidates included Google Hangouts, YouTube streaming, or GoToMeeting. We eventually went with GoToMeeting, which worked well once it was working. I was on a Linux laptop, and the GoToMeeting compatibility checker told me I’d be unable to install the software (eek, but I’m presenting a talk!) but then it mentioned I could use the web interface. Why not just tell me all will be OK and leave it at that? Then GoToMeeting demanded a password, which I did not have. Swapnil was on that immediately, and sent a message to the group saying we should just enter a single space, which worked.
The next hiccup was audio. I couldn’t get mine working with the meetup platform on my laptop, so I dialled in on my mobile phone. All good, but five minutes later the meetup platform managed to find the audio on my laptop after all. Major audio feedback. So I had to decide whether to trust the software and kill the phone call, or mute the software and go ahead with the phone. I killed the phone call, which turned out OK, Luckily so, because by this time it was my turn to give my lightning talk.
When you’re presenting to a remote audience, it’s like talking into the void, You have no idea if people are still there. And I couldn’t get my speaker notes to play well with the meetup platform, so I had to speak without them. That went OK too!
Phew, presentation finished. It was very nice to hear people come back on the audio connection, and nice seeing the comments in the chat room about my talk.
My final thought is:
What a great community we have. Let’s do it again!
The Tech Comm on a Map application now caters for 2018 conferences. This week I updated both the web app and the Android app to accept data for 2018. I also archived the 2016 conferences.
Tech Comm on a Map is an interactive map showing items of interest to technical communicators around the world: conferences, groups, businesses, societies, courses, and other things we find interesting. Tech Comm on a Map is available as a web app (see the previous link) and an Android app.
Highlights of the latest update:
- I’ve added a option, which you can click to add items to the map (new in the web app only; the Android app already has an Add event option in the menu).
- I’ve added a data type for 2018 conferences, and archived the 2016 conferences (web and Android).
Each coloured dot on the map represents a conference, business, society, group, course, or something else. Click a dot to see what it’s about.
Adding 2018 conferences and more
The map is now able to accept 2018 conferences, but there’s not much data on the map for 2018 yet. At this point I’ve added just two 2018 conferences. I’ll add more over the next few weeks.
If you have time, please do add items to the map: 2018 conferences, groups, societies, educational courses, and more. It’s also fun to add tidbits that you think are of interest to tech writers and have a geographical relevance. For example, the Other item type includes the birthplace of Ada Lovelace. Try de-selecting all event types except Other, and see what’s there now.
To add an item:
If you’d like to know more about the apps, how they work, and where the data comes from, take a look at the page about Tech Comm on a Map.